Feedback+from+Kathy+3-27-13

some notes about figures<> -Table description on the top --categorization of output from pool --footnotes -lower case e (for scientific notation -full library as a library --sub-library --plot not a validation -remove things you can't see -Figures more towards the center of the page -4T1 (not necessary to specify Balb/c) -for SMC. . peptide instead of protein -array scanned (not image) -table to explain Figure 3 

Her tracked changes on the word document found here (original file from her) "C:\kurt\storage\CIM Research Folder\kwhittem\Papers\My Possible Papers\3p_library\paper\Kathy feedback 3-27-13\original file\3p_library_rough_draft_6_3-18-13.docx"

My implementation of the changes here "C:\kurt\storage\CIM Research Folder\kwhittem\Papers\My Possible Papers\3p_library\paper\Kathy feedback 3-27-13\my revisions\3p_library_rough_draft_7_3-28-13.docx"

scanned document of Kathy's comments on figures and table here "C:\kurt\storage\CIM Research Folder\kwhittem\Papers\My Possible Papers\3p_library\paper\Kathy feedback 3-27-13\original file\Kathy's comments on figures.pdf"

I need to make a table describing the components in the figures. table for figure 3 outline "C:\kurt\storage\CIM Research Folder\DR\2013\3-28-13\table for figure 3\table for figure 3 outline.xlsx"

--- names of the 4 screens -3e6 clone screen -Validation of performance of selected lysate pools from 3e6 -clone screen -pool reduction screen -single clone array screen

alternative names for "clone" original transformants, components, constituants

alternative name for "spot" feature

alternative name for printing a new sublibrary from one of the features rearraying, reduction, partitioning

Rabbit sera? No mouse sera sera or purified antibody? sera

16E3 correlates with lysate pool number 15*96+12*4+3 = 1491

21G4 correlates with lysate pool number 21*96+6*12+4 = 2092

Is Table 1 or Figure 3 represented in the text first? -Figure 3 occurs on pg. 8 -Table 1 occurs on pg. 12 -Answer: so Figure 3 occurs 1st and Table 1 should become Table 2

My questions and comments for Kathy

-Who are the authors? Am I first author and you are second author?

-What are the affiliations? a Center for Innovations in Medicine, The Biodesign Institute, Arizona State University, Tempe, AZ, United States b Biological Design Program, Arizona State University, Tempe, AZ, United States

-Do we have to specify any special documentation for the mouse work we did? I don't know much about this.